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(a/n)- There will be swearing, don't like, don't read! Thx!

          “She said to take this to the office, right?” You mumbled to yourself as your grip on the folder in your hand tightened. You sighed slightly, your free hand trailing along the wall as you made your way through the halls. You were waiting for a room sign to come along, so you could tell if you were going the right way. Soon enough your hand brushed against something and you traced your fingers over the surface, smiling as you recognized the small bumps of braille.

          You read the room number, and smiled softly, now knowing that you were going the right way. You started walking down the hallway again, a hand trailing the wall just like always. You hummed to yourself lightly, listening to the rhythmic sounds of your footsteps as you got closer to the office. You tilted your head slightly when you heard a new set of footsteps join your own. You moved closer to the wall, hoping you weren’t going to be in the way. You kept walking, listening as the footsteps grew louder, meaning the person had gotten close to you. You frowned slightly when the footsteps stopped, and you tilted your head again to see if the person had walked away, when you were suddenly thrown against the wall.

          You gasped in surprise, the folder falling from your hand as a voice said,” Well, well, funny seeing you here miss no eyes.” You sighed as you recognized the owner of the voice, Al, the local bully. He’d always been a bully, bullying many students, and you were one of them. He bullied you daily, tripping you in the halls, slamming you into lockers, pinching you when teachers weren’t looking. You being the strong person you were, could handle the physical pain easily, but it was when he called you “Miss no eyes”, those were the only times he really got to you.

          He called you this because of the way you always had your eyes closed. You’d rarely opened your eyes since the day of the accident, the day you became blind. It was a freak accident they’d said. A girl in your chemistry class had tripped on something, a pencil or pen on the floor, the chemicals she was holding flying through the air. These chemicals had splashed on your face, going into your eyes, harming them in a way that left you sightless. Ever since then, you’d kept your eyes closed, as some of your classmates found your now milky (e/c) eyes unsettling. Soon after you started keeping your eyes closed, Al had started calling you “Miss no eyes”, and his bullying grew worse. It was kind of funny, you’d had a slight crush on him before the accident, but now instead of liking him you couldn’t care less.

          “Not really, seeing as I do go to school here.” You said angrily, attempting to get away from him. He placed a hand on your shoulder roughly, slamming you into the wall once again. You gasped as pain shot through your back and shoulder, and you were relieved when he took his hand away.

          “Aren’t you funny? I’ll see you later Miss no eyes.” He pushed you roughly as he started walking away, and you waited for his footsteps to disappear before you got on your knees to pick up the folder you’d dropped. You started looking for it, but it was difficult since you couldn’t see where it’d had gone. You opened your eyes, a force of habit when you were searching for something, and you kept patting the ground to see if the folder was there.

          You sighed, mumbling to yourself,” And this is why you shouldn’t ask the blind girl to take things to the office.”

++Al’s P.O.V++

          I walked away from Miss no eyes, turning my head for a second to look at her. I stopped, staring at her, wondering what the hell she was doing. She was on the ground, patting it with her hands as if she were looking for something. It was probably that stupid folder she’d dropped, but couldn’t she see it was right in front of her? Her not grabbing it was getting on my nerves, so I walked closer to see what was wrong with the idiot.

          I watched as she slowly turned towards me, her hands still patting the ground, and I stared at her as she opened her eyes. My own eyes widened in surprise, since I hadn’t seen her open them in a long time. My jaw dropped a little when I realized that her eyes were cloudy, almost as if she was-

          “And this is why you shouldn’t ask the blind girl to take things to the office.” I couldn’t help but stare at her in surprise, since when was she blind? I watched her as she finally managed to grab the folder, and she stood up, a hand touching the wall lightly. She walked away, mumbling to herself as her hand kept trailing along the wall.

          I started walking away, wondering when the hell she became blind. I mean, it explained why “Miss no eyes” never opened her eyes. I sighed angrily, kicking the floor as I walked into the bathroom. It’s not like I’m going to class anytime soon. I leaned against the wall, pulling a cigarette out. I lit it and put in my mouth, still thinking about “Miss no eyes”. I growled slightly, why was I still thinking about her?

++Your P.O.V++

          You walked along the sidewalk, the sound of your walking stick tapping on the ground becoming rhythmic. You hummed to yourself slightly, counting the steps you were taking so you knew when to turn to get home. You were so focused on counting you didn’t notice someone coming up behind you. You screamed slightly when someone grabbed you, quickly pulling you into what you think was an alleyway. You squirmed, trying to get away from the stranger, but they held your arms tightly.

          “Quit squirming, or I’ll knock you out!” You froze, fear racing through you at the sound of the threat.

          “Good, now how ‘bout you give me your money, and I-“The voice was cutoff as you felt something slam into the stranger. You flew forward, landing on your knees, and you turned your head to listen to what sounded like a fight. You heard a smacking noise, and you gasped as something fell next to you. Thinking it was the stranger, you took your walking sticking and started hitting the thing as hard as you could.

          “I’m pretty sure he’s knocked out, but you can keep hitting him if you want.” Your arm froze at the sound of the new voice, a voice you recognized.

          You lifted your head saying,” Al? Is that you?” You felt something grab your arm, lifting you off of the ground and onto your feet. You put your hands out to steady yourself, before you turned to the owner of the voice.

          “Yeah, who else would it be?” You frowned slightly at his rough tone, but you shook it off.

          “What are you doing here?” You felt him grab your arm, pulling towards what you think was the street.

          You heard him sigh before saying, “Saving your stupid ass.”

          You pouted and said,” Well, yeah, I know that. I mean, why were you there?”

          You could hear him grumble something before saying,” I was following you ok?”

          You raised an eyebrow asking,” Why would you be following me?”

          You waited for his answer, the sound of your walking stick filling the silence before he said,” Cause I wanted to see why I couldn’t stop thinking about dammit! And stop with that stupid stick already!” You frowned and quickly pulled your walking stick up, holding it in your hand as he continued,” Ever since this morning all I could think about was you, I mean, since when the hell were you blind?”

          You sighed, blushing slightly at the fact that he’d been thinking about you. You quickly shook your head, thinking that this was the guy who tormented you every day. You couldn’t let him get you…but, there was a part of you that kind of wanted that to happen. That part being the small remains of the crush you’d had on him. After a quick mental debate, the small remains won, and you sighed before turning towards Al.

          “How about we go somewhere, and I’ll tell you how I’m blind, ok?”

          You smiled slightly when he said,” Yeah, whatever.”

This was a request for :iconl-jack:

This is so bad! :( This is my first time writing a 2P! character, and I think I failed horribly. It sounded much better in my head, but now it doesn't look good! But I'm posting it anyway, cause you need mistakes to improve right?

I hope you liked it, even though I didn't, and thanks for reading! Please comment, I love reading them! :D

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Whybot221 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
cute...oh and Amelia blinded me
Ask2pCanadaandFaroes Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015
If I may ask how am I blind? A bad accident? Chemistry class? ....I hate chemicals...but I love playing with them.....

Great story by the way
thehetalian17 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Please make a part two!!!! This awezome story needs an awezome sequel!!
AoTLover345 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014   Digital Artist
Part. Two. NOWA ;-;
creepypastalemonlove Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Moymashed Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Is there more
Bluemoonteardrop134 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree there should be a second part. I love 2p hetalia so much 😍
bananabunchXD Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Part two?!!!!
Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
It's not bad!!! I like it :)
Koete1995 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
I loved this story and I think it is perfect in every way. So please continue it!!!
kinddertoten97 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I wish you could make a second part! T^T
link2008 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
this was amazing! really loved it!
HollowHaloz Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Nice story. I luv it!! plz make a pt.2
Jeff-The-Killer-1 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this was beautiful! I was wondering when you would be possibly making a part two? You know, if you are. :)
roro0098 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^
I've been planning on writing a part two to like three stories, and this is one of them!
I should be writing it soon, so don't worry! :D
Jeff-The-Killer-1 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, cool! Thanks!! :D
Faustita Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
awwwww~! <3 
Annoying-Cat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
this is really good! are you going to continue?
roro0098 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
Maybe, it depends on whether I have time! 
prussiafangirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
At first before the story said that reader was blind i thought she kept her eyes closed like italy or something XD
NyanCat001 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
...Omg, then us Reader-chans would be badass!!~
"How is she doing that?!"
"Run away!! It's a...HYPER BEAM!!!"
*VSH VSH VSH!!*:iconrainbowplz::iconitalyplz:
"What is this sorcery-?!"
prussiafangirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
aquarin02 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
Lolz same here
Breakslover Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
I love this! \(^o^)/ but I have one question... He never once thought that the reader was blind???
roro0098 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really happy you like it! :D
And nope, he always thought that she was just really weird for keeping her eyes closed, and he never saw her with her walking stick to kind of put two and two together 
Breakslover Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Oooooh... That makes more sense ^^; 
glaceon-master-18 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Sanactras Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student





kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

You did Amazing at describing the fact that the reader is blind (much better than I did)

So he never knew I was blind.

everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Please please please please please please PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
I really liked it =w=
L-Jack Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT! JUST PERFECT! And I am not lying when I say this, just perfect! You got him exactly right! Wonderful!
canadatheninja Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so AWESOME!!!! Will there be m,ore *^*
I-Ate-The-Rainbow Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It is so good, dear!
Will you continue this, or do you even plan to do so? That would be magnificent, really. 
roro0098 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
And there is a chance I might continue, if I find the time to do it! 
inlovewithitaly Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You didnt fail, I dont think that the 2p!s are actually really canon so do what you like! 
cuttlefish00 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awe this is sweet! Sorta, but I still like it!!
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